Poster/Ad Critique

Hi,


Any critique for this poster/ad for blood drive?

It looks nice I would just make the scale actually tipped to the side of the blood and add a shadow for the scale to make it look more real. Also put capital letters for the title and maybe somehow add more white space around the bottom text

Its looking really really good!
I would move the scale down so the bottom of the ad doesnt have tonz of info. Maybe move boroparkblooddrive ontop of scale?

Thanks everyone for the feedback! I actually had to make a deadline so I didn’t have much time for changes-I did angle the scale a bit more though. In general, I do such ads once a month but I usually use vectors because it goes in b&w in one of the papers so it just looks best like that. A few times I changed it up and did a 3d look but the b&w version does not look too great. I think I will stick to vector look:) The ads always have a lot of text and then the logos on the bottom. Any good ideas how to format the text and logos so it doesn’t look too cluttered?