Logo feedback

Hi

I created this logo for an organisation and would love to hear your thoughts.

They also want me to put the word “spark” somewhere but personally i think it’s too much for a logo and don’t really know where to put it. Any ideas?

Thanks!

Beautiful, creative and neat - everything fits together so nicely.
Can’t imagine another word would fit in there.
Love that spark that you already included in the Z!

Nice and clever! I like how the E’s make the Sefer.
I personally don’t like the spark at the bottom of the Z - maybe if you make the line of it thicker to match the font better, it would look better.
I was thinking you can write “A spark of Education . Recreation . Remediation” make the text much smaller so it fits nicely. Also think you should make the bullets a tiny bit smaller.
Good Luck!

really nice! i like it. i would connect add the sparkle a bit more to the Z.

very nice. you could try the middle Z rather than the end one so that its more part of the logo and then you don’t lose the end of the base of the Z . Agree with breindys suggestions to make line thicker and it needs to connect a bit better or it looks like the number 7
you could also have the O like a partial O ending with the star so the star is better seen

Thank you so much everyone!
unfortunately, the client did not end up using this one.
My question is, can I still use it in my portfolio?

Thats so frustrating!
I dont see why not!

Same! You may as well get use out of it :slight_smile:

oy, that’s so annoying :frowning:
You could put whatever you want in your portfolio…

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That’s great, thanks everyone.
Can I even put it on my website? Could it be that they will mind since it’s using their name and tagline?

For sure put it on your website