Invite Critique

I’m designing a simple E-Invite for a Shabbos Bar Mitzvah Kiddush, the client wants this specific design with the name in middle of the gold border… (she specifically wants gold.) I feel like it looks kind of empty…any ideas? Thanx!

Looks very nice! One comment, I would make the white border around the gold on all sides equal to the top one.

Thanx 4 the idea! is this better?

Definitely looks better, but now that I’m seeing it I would say to make it a little smaller than the top. Just a bit smaller

Also, the text feels quite close to the gold border on the bottom… maybe try to fix that

how about this? (sorry im making you crazy;) thnx a mill for your help

Looks great!! Pleasure!

I think it looks nice with the name like that :slight_smile:
Invitations often have text “groupings,” that can help make it feel more structured. I think what you have works perfectly as-is, but you could also look at an invitation to see what I mean and decide if that makes a difference.

I think it looks great!
Is the gold going to be printed with foil printing? It may look nice having the hebrew name in the gold as well

she wasn’t going to print it just E-Invite… In the end this is how it came out…she wanted black instead