Critics needed

Graphic Design
1

Hi,
Critics needed
Does it look more like a book cover than a hair ad?

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2

can you add in some curls?

3

I love it, I feel it is so different from the usual hair ads…

4

better?

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6

love

7

thanks for your helpful critic :wink:

8

I love the last version you posted. The hair looks more like hair now but still has that nice abstract look. I like the little scissors cut because of the “double meaning” over here. The other one with the smiley the hair looks less good and I find the smiley too casual for the rest of your advert. Great job!

9

I feel like it would look better if the hair would wave a drop more around the copy on the bottom to pull it together.

10

Thaks chavi. It does look better.

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11

Very nice!!!

12

Love this! Unique hair ad - nice to see a fresh idea.

13

I like how you turned the hair more! looks really nice.