How can I make this nicer?
They are going to be tickets to hand out for those helping out with a campaign.
Each ticket will have a different pledge amount. They didn’t choose a slogan yet so there is just place-holder text there for now.
Thank you!
How can I make this nicer?
They are going to be tickets to hand out for those helping out with a campaign.
Each ticket will have a different pledge amount. They didn’t choose a slogan yet so there is just place-holder text there for now.
Love the 3D numbers!
thank you:)
but i think i know whats bothering me now: The angle of the 3d letters do not match the “i commit myself…”.
Is that something to be concerned about? And is there a way to change that in InDesign?
I am sorry about my constant posts…
This project is a rush job. They want it printed and handed out by motzei shabbos!
Here is another option I can go for:
I agree with you about the angle.
I like the letters on top better.
I love it with the background color!
This is just my personal taste, but I would go for a stronger sans serif font for I Commit…
(Maybe a font with less contrast)
Unless it’s the same font as the numbers?
Also, how would it look if I commit was in a similar 3D style to the letters, maybe just that indentation that the numbers have?
Another idea:
Could you do the logo going down the side so that you use more of the space there?
Interesting idea to make them both 3d. I’ll try that.
What do you mean by making the logo going down the side?
rotate 90 degrees and make it bigger so that it goes down either side
hope I’m being clear…
And here is going off of Chani_Wolpin’s idea
ok. nobody else gave their opinions, but the project was postponed another week BH!
So here is a new idea I came up with. I’m just not sure how to go about with the website…
I like the first base with the white background. It really helps to focus on the i commit to raise $…
I like the first one that you posted.
I dont find it an issue that the letterings are not all on the same angle since the I commit is 2d.
I would also leave the logo on the bottom right corner like it was there, and I like the background in white.
Really nice update!
And here’s another opinion to add to the mix 
I like the “I commit…” sentence on 1 line, seems stronger that way
but I would put the number underneath it, not on top
And just repeating my same old ideas, 
rotate both the logo and the website, on on each side along edge centered vertically…
Good luck, and all of the options look really good!
I also like the white bkgd and layout 
thank you for all of the replies!
i’ll let you know what happens…