Please give any comments, critiques etc…thanks!!!
(Should I make the letters a different color or leave them black?) Should I leave the boy and girl in color or make everything black and white?
Very cute 
I like with the color!
i would try to make the faces look a tad less typical and have a bit more style and character (excuse the pun),
And once you add more style and character to the faces I would also tilt them each a bit, one a positive value and one a negative value instead of them being straight
so cute:)
I like the color version.
Also, what about giving the text a color? Something bright and cute? yellow? emoji?
And giving the characters each their own face expression would add a lot as well.
Very cute. The faces can be a bit smaller.
Agree about adding style and character to the kids, and tilting them as well!
I would add color to the text, and I wonder if not a script font would work better for a kids logo
Love that you made the boy and girl between the words!
And I agree to put some more life into the characters, I think just by changing the expression/face a bit would make a big difference!
Really nice!