I personally like the version 2 better. Client likes version 1. What do you think? And what can I improve on either to present the design again?
Version 1 is clean and clear and more typical. Version 2 is more unique
But if the client is happy with version 1 then I would say go for it! It looks very nice and clear
On the back side of version 1 should the pushka have a dot in green?
Thank you @adinacahn.
The idea of the circle is the coin shape. Should I try to combine the 2 like make a less sharp circle? or just leave it…
Something like this:
I am also not sure about the 2 pictures. Something is bothering me about it. Looks nebby? Not sure.
Maybe if it has the green around, at the moment it looks like is it supposed to be straight or supposed to be rounded.
I didn’t think the pictures look wrong. But maybe I would do a pocket with a questions mark? not sure if it would look right but maybe one phone and one pocket would look less balanced/typical
i don’t have comments on the 2 versions but i just want to complement you and the copy writer and whoever’s idea this is on an amazing job - this caught my eye and I read ALL the text from start to finish and have been convinced the app is a great idea!!! hatzlacha to it!
It’s really nice!
I just wanted to point out that the period in the first paragraph on the “give a nickel” pg is on the wrong side.
Also, maybe there should be a period at the end of the next paragraph.
I’ll pass it on. I did the full branding for him and now adding the other deliverables. Website, brochure and app design. It’s an exciting project B’H.
@al1 Thanks for noticing. The paragraph setting was set to Hebrew. Not sure why Indesign always starts off in Hebrew direction by me.
I like the first page of #2 and the second page of #1
Wow! its really eye catching and i love the logo! both version are nice, but i like the first better. the first page of the second version is nice, but maybe you can add something more to the second.
Great design! I also prefer the first option
If you are working on CC change your preference setting of language to English not English Tomeich Ivrit
Thank you very much to everyone for taking the time to answer! It was really helpful. In the end we are going with version 1.
Hooray! I really like it. Clean, Crisp and clear!
Maybe I’m slow… but why does it say “give a nickle” and then .25?
yes, maybe change it to say a quarter!
a nickel is .05
Gosh! I didn’t even notice. I am not American… I will tell the client! Thank you so much for bringing this up!