Here are my thoughts
- It is a very attractive ad with so much potential! The photo is very pleasant and catches the eye. The colors are calming.
- I love the copy!! So intriguing!!
- Having the photo again in the background does make it a little busy. I think the photo would draw the eye more on a simple background
- Regarding the text alignment - I would stick with either all centered or all left-aligned
- The hierarchy of where to look first is a little tough. I want to read all the copy but I don’t know where to start.
- The info at the bottom seems like stuff I should probably read and important info but it’s just a little cluttered down there. Especially an ad for an organizer should feel breezy and open
Consider moving some of the info to a ‘stamp’, and visually separating the info more. - For the stay neat logo, that background needs to come out. Try tracing on illustrator or separating the layers somehow on photoshop.
- Good luck, can’t wait to see the final product!
wow its a whole new ad!! looks really really nice! its neat, clean and easy to read!!
thank you!
it looks very good now! can you change the font on top to the same font as the logo or something… i think it has too may fonts.
looks really really nice!
maybe make the top text bigger, and the stay neat smaller…
and maybe put the top text into one line… can you find a font that is more similar?
I’m obsessed with the copy! @shirazuckerman who did it?
The ad is amazing! Those changes make a huge difference.
I’d suggest you maybe make the headline bigger, and can you use the same font as the logo?
Also, maybe move the badge a bit higher, and icon in it a bit bigger, or maybe with a separating line?
Also, shouldn’t you add the social icons by stayneat_byrosie? I’m not on social so correct me if I’m wrong about that, but to me it seems to be missing…
there is an extra space in the top paragraph before the words “your no - shoes”…
thank you!
rena Klugmann rena@rkcopy.com
I can’t find the font, I didn’t do the logo
Ask the client if she has any kind of brand guide or if she can find out from the logo designer… If she has a brand guide you can see which font she used in acrobat even if the guide doesn’t list it if it was used in the guide…