Ad for a Sefer

Hi everyone,

Im making an ad for this sefer, I got very detailed instructions how to place all the wording on the left side and sefer on right.
which background looks best, and how can I pull it together?

Thankx everyone!!!

I like the right one best, very regal looking.
Maybe the title font can be a little more different, or find glyphs with fancy accents…
Maybe the text should be in a lower oppacity so it shouldnt be such bright white.
Keep us posted!

I like the third one the best. The coloring brings out the sefer very nicely, without overpowering it. Nice work!

I don’t know the client, but I would say something about the left alignment. It makes it very hard to read Hebrew text when it’s left aligned - same way you wouldn’t right align English text.

I like the third best but agree that title font should be a little more exciting. Would you be able to make the sefer a little smaller and get some more space both to the left and right of advert.

The ad on the left is beautiful!


Why don’t you try to use the color from the title on the sefer (beige) for the ad title and maybe also for the bar on the bottom? That way the white won’t be so strong, and you’ll be bringing out the color on the sefer as a better accent color. Also, I like the bright red behind the sefer, maybe you can bring it out on top of the sefer, to highlight the sefer and make it more of a focal point. Hope that helps, hatzlacha!

Did she say to specifically left align the text? maybe you can right align it on the left so that it sits with the sefer more neatly.
What I think is nicer about the third one is that the sefer and words are more equal in height.
Maybe make the sefer a bit smaller, have the top three lines (hofea until lefkowitz) center aligned under the title. then have the words vertically justified with the sefer on the left.

The background options you can give the client, though I like the first one best. after right aligning the text, I would align it with the bottom of the sefer, and bring down the title along with it, if possible aligned to the top of the sefer…

Very helpful tips!!
So he likes the middle one the best because its the lightest, I tried lightening the other one.
what do you think now. The one on the right or left? anything else to change?

Definitely better with the text right aligned - a few points that can make it even better:
The title should either be centered or aligned with the Sefer (it looks a bit off now)
I would leave more space in the margin of the page
I would also leave more space between the Sefer and the text

Very nice! I like the right one.
I agree with zaksahuva1.
I would also say to center the sefer and text more evenly between the bar at the bottom and the tittle.
Also, make sure that the text in the bottom bar is evenly justified vertically. Maybe round the corners of the bar to soften it a bit?