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Hi!

I’m designing this ad for a Poland trip. Not 100% sure it’s there yet. How does it look? Any suggestion welcome!

(The logo in the bottom corner is pixelated because I’m waiting to get the vector version.)

The ad is for the web, not print.

Thank you so much!

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This looks pretty good. I feel like you have to make it look more “convincing.” Maybe you should add in some pictures from Poland (You can PM me for some pictures - I went and got pretty good pictures…)
You should have an en dash between the date, January 2nd and Sunday…
I think you should bring the text on the left down a little…(it should be centered) The text looks a little boring. Maybe use the yellow color in the words “Meor Poland” and change the gray background to either a really light gray background or white…
Good Luck!!

I know you can’t go too funky because it is a Poland trip, but i would definitely add some color. After all its a girls group trip. Bonding. Experience. Friends.
These are all terms that come to my mind. Right now it looks a bit depressing.
Also, text has to be bigger and image smaller. Give it some life! And let people join this special journey along with you.

Agree with some points made above. Not sure it will entice people to want to go on the trip as is. Obviously the topic is serious, but the main image doesn’t really attract people to want to go. Perhaps instead of the stripes you could have photos of Poland there, maybe from past years, showing some of the activities and the group interaction etc., and perhaps the start can stay, a little smaller and moved down, with the barbed wire, to tie together the other images. Just one options, there are other ways that you can add more enticing imagery.
Also agree about more color. As it is now the main title could in yellow, but you might be able to pull some colors from the photos if you add them to add to the text side. You could keep those color relatively muted, but still needs some visual draw. Also as it is now feels a bit top heavy where the text is. Top three lines could be bigger and more dramatic, then some space and the rest of the info taking more room as you go further down.