Hi,
I’d appreciate all feedback on this ad campaign.
Sorry 'bout the watermarked images 
Thanks so much!
Does this look too boring?
Has to look professional and appeal to an audience that deals with and would potentially donate cryptocurrency, but I don’t know if it got too blah in the process 
TIA!
Anyone? Any comments?
Hi! I think that they need something else because they are all too similar to make it look exciting-how about making each one a different shade of blue?
Maybe on the second flyer u can add the icon for whatever this is -I think it’s all virtual so maybe there’s like a nice social media kind of logo that you can add to the mixture to make it look more exciting?
I think overall they look really nice!!
Can’t wait to see an update!
Hatzlacha!!
Good points, thanks so much @Ahuva for your help!
Overall I think they all look a little too similar, with the coins etc. The first one visually looks a little different with the car, but the other two look quite similar, and not so different from the first visually. Also the first image looks a bit cut off on the left side and around the car cast shadow…Perhaps the imagery could be a little more eye catching overall?
INteresting concept and clean layout!
i just want to say that for me the bold headlines and subheads really stood out and made me want to read them!! I wasn’t so fussed about the pictures.
I quite like that you used the same series of colours, makes sense for a campaign.
Now looking at each again i think the chessed one picture could have something more to do with chessed (e.g. maybe cardboard boxes of gifts or food or something) but i think the car and change ones fit very well to the text.
well done!
Thank you so much @Alyse-Bayles and @rivkah for your feedback! That was really helpful!
What do you say to this?
Oh wow! I think that these changes really bring it up a level!
yup looking good…
Thanks again for your help, @Ahuva @Alyse-Bayles and @rivkah !
I’m stuck about what to do now, though:
The client wanted a more “powerful” look and a more high-tech look.
I made some revisions, attached below.
Client feels like it’s not enough and gave an idea of how to change it.
Problem is, I think their idea looks bad.
What would you do in such a situation?
Thanks so much!
Just posting my question here helped me 
I played around using the idea that the client wanted and I might have come up with a solution.
How does this look?
Any critique or suggestions?
Thanks so much!
This one looks amazing!!
It gives that cyber space kind of feel which is what I think they were aiming for!!
Good job!
Maybe no you should center the info in the bottom block?
also maybe the line about crypto currency can be a bit bigger or stronger?
cant wait to see the others!
yes really impactful!! well done! hope they like it
Good job @Chani_Wolpin
I spotted the first ad in the Chicago Bulletin!
Job well done!
Thanks @Ahuva 
!! You’re so sweet!
Thanks everyone for your help with this!!!
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Really nice, Chani!
love the final version! very sharp!
This came a long way from the original one, nice job!
Great job Chani 